第七十八回 老學士閒徵姽嫿詞 痴公子杜撰芙蓉誄 An Old Scholar Sets a Theme on a Warrior Maiden; A Lovesick Youth Composes a Dirge for the Lotus

便便便:“After the two nuns had led Fangguan and the others away, Lady Wang went to pay her morning respects to Grandmother Jia. Finding her in good spirits, she took the opportunity to report: “There is a maid called Qingwen in Baoyu’s rooms. The girl is grown now, and for the past year has scarcely been free of illness. I have often noticed that she is exceptionally unruly and lazy; the other day she fell ill again for more than ten days, and when the physician examined her, he said it was consumption, so I had her sent away at once.Even if she recovers, there is no need to call her back; we may simply give her to her family to marry off.I have also taken it upon myself to release those girls who were trained for the stage.使For one thing, having learned theatricals, they speak without any sense of propriety and talk nothing but nonsense; how can the young ladies be allowed to hear it?For another, since they have performed for us for a time, it is only right that we should set them free without demanding payment.使。”:“Besides, we have too many maids already. If ever there are not enough to serve us, we can always select a few more.” Grandmother Jia nodded. “That is perfectly reasonable. I was thinking of doing the same myself.But I thought very well of that girl Qingwen. How did she come to this?使To my mind, none of these maids could match her in looks, quickness, conversation, or needlework; I thought that, in the future, she alone would be fit to wait on Baoyu.。”:“Who would have thought she would change?” Lady Wang smiled. “Anyone chosen by the Old Lady could not originally have been amiss.I fear she simply had no good fortune in her destiny, and that is why she contracted this illness.,‘’。As the saying goes, ‘A girl changes eighteen times as she grows.’調And capable people can hardly help being somewhat perverse.There is nothing the Old Lady has not experienced.I began paying attention to this matter three years ago.便As soon as I saw that you had singled her out, I began watching her.Observing her dispassionately, I found that although she surpassed the others in every respect, she was not sufficiently steady.For steadiness and knowledge of proper conduct, no one comes before Xiren.Though people speak of a worthy wife and beautiful concubines, it is better still that they be gentle in temper and composed in conduct.Xiren may be slightly inferior to Qingwen in looks, but among the girls kept in the rooms she still ranks in the first or second class.Moreover, she conducts herself with dignity and has an honest heart. In all these years she has never humored Baoyu in his mischief.Whenever Baoyu behaves outrageously, she does nothing but earnestly remonstrate with him.After observing and weighing her merits for two years, until I was certain there was no mistake, I quietly stopped her ordinary maid’s allowance and authorized two taels a month for her from my own allowance.使I meant only to let her know privately, so that she would become still more careful and strive to improve herself.I did not announce it because, first, Baoyu is still young, and if the Master learned of it he might say it was distracting him from his studies; and second, if Baoyu considered her already his own intimate attendant, he might no longer let her advise or criticize him and instead grow even more willful.。”:“That is why I have waited until today to inform the Old Lady.” Grandmother Jia smiled. “So that is how matters stand. Then it is better still.Xiren was always so silent from childhood that I used to call her a gourd without a mouth.Since you know her so thoroughly, there can hardly be any great mistake.And your idea of not telling Baoyu openly is better still.Let none of us mention the matter; we need only know it in our hearts.I know very well that Baoyu will grow into a man who refuses to heed the advice of wife or concubine.I cannot account for him, and I have never seen another child like him.His other mischievous ways are only to be expected; it is his fondness for the maids that is so hard to understand.I have worried about this too, and often watched him closely without appearing to do so.I thought that, since he was forever romping with the maids, he must have grown old and knowing enough to understand relations between men and women, and therefore liked being close to them.But after testing and investigating him carefully, I found that this was not the reason after all.Is that not strange?。”Can it be that he was really a maid who entered the wrong body at birth?” At this, everyone laughed.Lady Wang then told her how Jia Zheng had praised Baoyu that day and taken them out with him. Grandmother Jia was still more delighted to hear it.

话说两个尼姑领了芳官等去后,王夫人便往贾母处来省晨,见贾母喜欢,便趁便回道:“宝玉屋里有个晴雯,那个丫头也大了,而且一年之间,病不离身,我常见他比别人分外淘气,也懒,前日又病倒了十几天,叫大夫瞧,说是女儿痨,所以我就赶著叫他下去了。若养好了也不用叫他进来,就赏他家配人去也罢了。再那几个学戏的女孩子,我也作主放出去了。一则他们都会戏,口里没轻没重,只会混说,女孩儿们听了如何使得?二则他们既唱了会子戏,白放了他们,也是应该的。况丫头们也太多,若说不够使,再挑上几个来也是一样。”贾母听了,点头道:“这倒是正理,我也正想著如此呢。但晴雯那丫头我看他甚好,怎么就这样起来。我的意思这些丫头的模样爽利言谈针线多不及他,将来只他还可以给宝玉使唤得。谁知变了。”王夫人笑道:“老太太挑中的人原不错。只怕他命里没造化,所以得了这个病。俗语又说,‘女大十八变’。况且有本事的人,未免就有些调歪。老太太还有什么不曾经验过的。三年前我也就留心这件事。先只取中了他,我便留心。冷眼看去,他色色虽比人强,只是不大沉重。若说沉重知大礼,莫若袭人第一。虽说贤妻美妾,然也要性情和顺举止沉重的更好些。就是袭人模样虽比晴雯略次一等,然放在房里,也算得一二等的了。况且行事大方,心地老实,这几年来,从未逢迎著宝玉淘气。凡宝玉十分胡闹的事,他只有死劝的。因此品择了二年,一点不错了,我就悄悄的把他丫头的月分钱止住,我的月分银子里批出二两银子来给他。不过使他自己知道越发小心学好之意。且不明说者,一则宝玉年纪尚小,老爷知道了又恐说耽误了书,二则宝玉再自为已是跟前的人不敢劝他说他,反倒纵性起来。所以直到今日才回明老太太。”贾母听了,笑道:“原来这样,如此更好了。袭人本来从小儿不言不语,我只说他是没嘴的葫芦。既是你深知,岂有大错误的。而且你这不明说与宝玉的主意更好。且大家别提这事,只是心里知道罢了。我深知宝玉将来也是个不听妻妾劝的。我也解不过来,也从未见过这样的孩子。别的淘气都是应该的,只他这种和丫头们好却是难懂。我为此也耽心,每每的冷眼查看他。只和丫头们闹,必是人大心大,知道男女的事了,所以爱亲近他们。既细细查试,究竟不是为此。岂不奇怪。想必原是个丫头错投了胎不成。”说著,大家笑了。王夫人又回今日贾政如何夸奖,又如何带他们逛去,贾母听了,更加喜悦。

Presently, Yingchun came in fully dressed to take her leave before departing.Xifeng also came to pay her morning respects, waited on Grandmother Jia through breakfast, and stayed chatting and laughing for a while.便After Grandmother Jia retired for her midday rest, Lady Wang summoned Xifeng and asked whether her pills had yet been prepared.:““Not yet,” Xifeng replied. “For now I am still taking a medicinal decoction.。”Please do not worry, Aunt; I am much better already.” Seeing that her spirits had returned, Lady Wang believed her.:“She then told her about driving out Qingwen and the others, and added, “How was it that Baochai went home to sleep without any of you knowing?The other day, while passing through, I inspected all the households.Who would have thought that this new wet nurse of young Lan’s should also be exceedingly affected and coquettish? I do not like her either.I have told your elder sister-in-law that, whether she likes it or not, the woman had better be sent away.Besides, young Lan is grown now and has no need of a wet nurse.:‘?’I asked your elder sister-in-law, ‘Can it be that you did not know Baochai had gone out either?’ She said Baochai had told her and would stay away only two or three days, returning when your aunt was better.Your aunt is not seriously ill after all; it is only the same cough and pain in the waist that she has every year.Baochai must have some reason for leaving. Could someone have offended her?。”:“That child takes things deeply to heart. After our relatives have stayed with us all this time, it would be unfortunate if we offended them.” Xifeng smiled. “Who would offend her for no reason?。”:“。”:“Besides, she is in the Garden every day and sees scarcely anyone but that group of sisters.” Lady Wang said, “Perhaps Baoyu, who speaks without thinking and, like a simpleton, has never known any restraint, may have blurted out some nonsense in high spirits.” Xifeng smiled. “Aunt, you are worrying far too much.Send him out on serious business to discuss serious matters and he does seem a fool; but among these sisters and all the maids, senior or junior, no one is more yielding or more afraid of offending others. There can be no question of anyone taking offense at him.西I think Cousin Xue left because of the recent search through all the maids’ belongings.Naturally, the search was made because the people in the Garden were not trusted. But she is a relative and has maids and older serving-women living there too; since we could hardly search them, she feared we might suspect her and, thinking more deeply about it than necessary, withdrew of her own accord.。”便It was proper for her to avoid suspicion.” Lady Wang thought Xifeng’s explanation sound. After pondering it with lowered head, she sent for Baochai, explained what had happened the other day to dispel her suspicions, and again asked her to return and live in the Garden as before.:“便Baochai smiled politely. “I had long intended to move out, but Aunt had so many important affairs in hand that it was inconvenient to mention it.便As it happened, Mother fell ill again the other day, and the two dependable women in our household were ill as well, so I took the opportunity to leave.西。”:“Now that Aunt knows, I can explain the reasons plainly and take my leave today, so that my things may be moved.” Lady Wang and Xifeng both laughed. “You are much too obstinate.。”:“The proper thing is to move back in. Do not let some trivial matter estrange us as relatives.” Baochai smiled. “That is a great misunderstanding. I did not leave because of anything that happened.I left because Mother’s strength and spirits have lately declined greatly, and at night there is no dependable person with her; altogether, she has only me.Second, my brother will plainly be marrying soon. Much needlework and many household utensils needed for the wedding are still unprepared, so I must help Mother see to them.Aunt and Cousin Xifeng both know the circumstances of our family; I am not making this up.Third, ever since I came to live in the Garden, the small gate in the southeast corner has constantly been kept open for my use. Others coming and going may well take that way too because it is shorter, and no one checks them. If some incident should arise there, would it not compromise both households?Moreover, my moving into the Garden was never a matter of great importance. In earlier years we were all young, and as there was nothing requiring me at home, it was better to join the sisters here, sewing, playing, and laughing together, than to sit outside in boredom. Now we are all older, and each of us has her own concerns.Besides, Aunt’s household has year after year met with unfortunate troubles. The Garden is so large that everything cannot always be attended to, though every lapse has consequences; with fewer people, there will be fewer worries.Therefore, not only am I determined to take my leave today, but I would also advise Aunt to reduce whatever can now be reduced, without thereby impairing the dignity of a great household.In my view, the entire expense of the Garden might now be dispensed with. Things are no longer as they were in those days.。”便:“。”:“便。”Aunt knows our family well. Surely our own home was not so desolate then?” After hearing this speech, Xifeng smiled at Lady Wang. “What she says is quite right; there is no need to press her.” Lady Wang nodded. “I have no answer to make, so I can only let you do as you please.”

一时,只见迎春妆扮了前来告辞过去。凤姐也来省晨,伺候过早饭,又说笑了一回。贾母歇晌后,王夫人便唤了凤姐,问他丸药可曾配来。凤姐儿道:“还不曾呢,如今还是吃汤药。太太只管放心,我已大好了。”王夫人见他精神复初,也就信了。因告诉撵逐晴雯等事,又说:“怎么宝丫头私自回家睡了,你们都不知道?我前儿顺路都查了一查。谁知兰小子这一个新进来的奶子也十分的妖乔,我也不喜欢他。我也说与你嫂子了,好不好叫他各自去罢。况且兰小子也大了,用不著奶子了。我因问你大嫂子:‘宝丫头出去难道你也不知道不成?’他说是告诉了他的,不过住两三日,等你姨妈好了就进来。姨妈究竟没甚大病,不过还是咳嗽腰疼,年年是如此的。他这去必有原故,敢是有人得罪了他不成?那孩子心重,亲戚们住一场,别得罪了人,反不好了。”凤姐笑道:“谁可好好的得罪著他?况且他天天在园里,左不过是他们姊妹那一群人。”王夫人道:“别是宝玉有嘴无心,傻子似的从没个忌讳,高兴了信嘴胡说也是有的。”凤姐笑道:“这可是太太过于操心了。若说他出去于正经事说正经话去,却象个傻子,若只叫进来在这些姊妹跟前以至于大小的丫头们跟前,他最有尽让,又恐怕得罪了人,那是再不得有人恼他的。我想薛妹妹此去,想必为著前时搜检众丫头的东西的原故。他自然为信不及园里的人才搜检,他又是亲戚,现也有丫头老婆在内,我们又不好去搜检,恐我们疑他,所以多了这个心,自己回避了。也是应该避嫌疑的。”王夫人听了这话不错,自己遂低头想了一想,便命人请了宝钗来分晰前日的事以解他疑心,又仍命他进来照旧居住。宝钗陪笑道:“我原要早出去的,只是姨娘有许多的大事,所以不便来说。可巧前日妈又不好了,家里两个靠得的女人也病著,我所以趁便出去了。姨娘今日既已知道了,我正好明讲出情理来,就从今日辞了好搬东西的。”王夫人凤姐都笑著:“你太固执了。正经再搬进来为是,休为没要紧的事反疏远了亲戚。”宝钗笑道:“这话说的太不解了,并没为什么事我出去。我为的是妈近来神思比先大减,而且夜间晚上没有得靠的人,通共只我一个。二则如今我哥哥眼看要娶嫂子,多少针线活计并家里一切动用的器皿,尚有未齐备的,我也须得帮著妈去料理料理。姨妈和凤姐姐都知道我们家的事,不是我撒谎。三则自我在园里,东南上小角门子就常开著,原是为我走的,保不住出入的人就图省路也从那里走,又没人盘查,设若从那里生出一件事来,岂不两碍脸面。而且我进园里来住原不是什么大事,因前几年年纪皆小,且家里没事,有在外头的,不如进来姊妹相共,或作针线,或顽笑,皆比在外头闷坐著好,如今彼此都大了,也彼此皆有事。况姨娘这边历年皆遇不遂心的事故,那园子也太大,一时照顾不到,皆有关系,惟有少几个人,就可以少操些心。所以今日不但我执意辞去,之外还要劝姨娘如今该减些的就减些,也不为失了大家的体统。据我看,园里这一项费用也竟可以免的,说不得当日的话。姨娘深知我家的,难道我们当日也是这样冷落不成。”凤姐听了这篇话,便向王夫人笑道:“这话竟是,不必强了。”王夫人点头道:“我也无可回答,只好随你便罢了。”

As they spoke, Baoyu and the others returned, explaining that their father’s gathering had not yet broken up, but that, fearing it would grow dark, he had sent them home first.:“?”:“西。”西Lady Wang hurriedly asked, “Did you disgrace yourself today?” Baoyu laughed. “Far from disgracing myself, I came away with a great many things.” Just then, older serving-women brought in the articles they had received from the pages at the inner gate.Lady Wang looked and saw three fans, three fan pendants, six cases of brushes and ink, three strings of fragrant beads, and three jade sash-rings.:“。”怀:“。”“These are from Academician Mei,” said Baoyu, “those are from Vice-Minister Yang, and these from Imperial Household Member Li—one set from each.” Then he took from his bosom a little protective Buddha carved of sandalwood. “Duke Qing gave me this especially.” After Lady Wang had finished asking who had attended the banquet and what poems and verses had been composed, she had Baoyu’s share carried for him and took Baoyu, Lan, and Huan to see Grandmother Jia.Grandmother Jia was delighted beyond measure when she saw the gifts, and naturally asked them a number of questions.便But Baoyu’s whole mind was on Qingwen. As soon as he had finished answering, he said that the jolting of the horse had made his bones ache.便:“。”便“Hurry back to your rooms,” said Grandmother Jia. “Change your clothes and move about a little; then you will be well. You are not to lie down.” Hearing this, Baoyu hurried into the Garden.

话说之间,只见宝玉等已回来,因说他父亲还未散,恐天黑了,所以先叫我们回来了。王夫人忙问:“今日可有丢了丑?”宝玉笑道:“不但不丢丑,倒拐了许多东西来。”接著,就有老婆子们从二门上小厮手内接了东西来。王夫人一看时,只见扇子三把,扇坠三个,笔墨共六匣,香珠三串,玉绦环三个。宝玉说道:“这是梅翰林送的,那是杨侍郎送的,这是李员外送的,每人一分。”说著,又向怀中取出一个旃檀香小护身佛来,说:“这是庆国公单给我的。”王夫人又问在席何人,作何诗词等语毕,只将宝玉一分令人拿著,同宝玉兰环前来见过贾母。贾母看了,喜欢不尽,不免又问些话。无奈宝玉一心记著晴雯,答应完了话时,便说骑马颠了,骨头疼。贾母便说:“快回房去换了衣服,疏散疏散就好了,不许睡倒。”宝玉听了,便忙入园来。

便Sheyue and Qiuwen had already brought two young maids and were waiting. When Baoyu took leave of Grandmother Jia and came out, Qiuwen picked up the brushes and ink, and they all followed him into the Garden.滿”,便穿Baoyu kept saying how hot he was. As he walked, he removed his cap and loosened his belt, taking off all his outer clothes and giving them to Sheyue. He was left wearing only a lined jacket of pine-flower-colored damask, beneath which showed trousers as crimson as drops of blood.:“。”:“。”:“!”:“。”便:“?”:“Seeing that the red trousers were Qingwen’s needlework, Qiuwen sighed. “These trousers should be put away after this. Truly, the thing remains though its maker is gone.” Sheyue hastily laughed. “Yes, they are Qingwen’s work.” Then she too sighed. “Truly, the thing remains while its maker is dead!” Qiuwen tugged at her and said with a laugh, “These trousers, with that pine-flower jacket and dark-blue boots, make his indigo-dark hair and snowy-white face stand out all the more.” Walking ahead, Baoyu pretended not to hear. After another few steps he stopped. “I want to go for a walk. What are we to do?” “It is broad daylight,” said Sheyue. “What is there to fear?!”,”西。”:“。”:“Do you think someone will steal you?” She told the two young maids to accompany him. “We will put these things away and come back.” Baoyu said, “Dear sisters, wait until I return before you go.” Sheyue replied, “We shall be back as soon as we have gone.西。”怀便Both of us have our hands full. We look like attendants in a ceremonial procession, one bearing the scholar’s four treasures and the other your cap, robe, belt, and shoes. What sort of spectacle is that?” This was exactly what Baoyu wanted to hear, so he let them go.

当下麝月秋纹已带了两个丫头来等候,见宝玉辞了贾母出来,秋纹便将笔墨拿起来,一同随宝玉进园来。宝玉满口里说”好热”,一壁走,一壁便摘冠解带,将外面的大衣服都脱下来麝月拿著,只穿著一件松花绫子夹袄,袄内露出血点般大红裤子来。秋纹见这条红裤是晴雯手内针线,因叹道:“这条裤子以后收了罢,真是物件在人去了。”麝月忙也笑道:“这是晴雯的针线。”又叹道:“真真物在人亡了!”秋纹将麝月拉了一把,笑道:“这裤子配著松花色袄儿,石青靴子,越显出这靛青的头,雪白的脸来了。”宝玉在前只装听不见,又走了两步,便止步道:“我要走一走,这怎么好?”麝月道:“大白日里,还怕什么?还怕丢了你不成!”因命两个小丫头跟著,”我们送了这些东西去再来。”宝玉道:“好姐姐,等一等我再去。”麝月道:“我们去了就来。两个人手里都有东西,倒向摆执事的,一个捧著文房四宝,一个捧著冠袍带履,成个什么样子。”宝玉听见,正中心怀,便让他两个去了。

便:“?”:“。”:“?”:“。”:“?”:“。”:“?”:“。”:“。”便:“。”:“。”:“?”:“Taking the two young maids behind a rock, he did nothing else but ask them, “Since I went out, has Sister Xiren sent anyone to see Sister Qingwen?” One replied, “She sent Mamma Song.” “What did she say when she returned?” asked Baoyu. The young maid answered, “She said Sister Qingwen cried out all night with her neck rigid. Early this morning she closed her eyes and fell silent, knowing nothing of the world. She could not make another sound and could only gasp out her last breaths.” Baoyu hurriedly asked, “Whom did she call all night?” “She called for her mother.” Wiping away tears, Baoyu asked, “Who else did she call?” “I did not hear her call anyone else.” “You little fool,” said Baoyu. “You surely did not hear clearly.” The other young maid, who was the cleverer of the two, heard this and came forward. “She really is a fool.” Then she said to Baoyu, “Not only did I hear clearly; I secretly went to see her myself.” Baoyu quickly asked, “How did you come to go yourself?” The young maid said, “I thought that Sister Qingwen was always unlike other people and treated us especially well.Now, though she was wronged and driven out, there was no other way for us to save her. By going to see her in person, at least I did not betray all the kindness she had shown us.Even if someone found out, reported me to Her Ladyship, and had me beaten, I was willing to bear it.So I risked a beating and secretly slipped out to see her.Who would have thought that, clever as she had been all her life, she remained so even at death?便:‘?’She thought those vulgar people unfit to be spoken to, so she merely closed her eyes and rested. When she saw me, she opened them, took my hand, and asked, ‘Where has Baoyu gone?’ I told her the truth.:‘。’:‘?’:‘She sighed and said, ‘I shall not be able to see him.’ I said, ‘Sister, why not wait until he returns and see him once? Then would not both your wishes be fulfilled?’ She smiled. ‘You still do not understand.I am not dying. A Flower Goddess is missing in Heaven, and the Jade Emperor has issued a decree appointing me to take charge.I must assume my office over the flowers today at the second quarter past midday, while Baoyu will not reach home until the third quarter. We shall miss each other by only one quarter of an hour, but we cannot meet.When a mortal is due to die and the King of Hell summons them away, he sends minor demons to seize the soul.漿If one wishes to delay them for a little while, one need only burn paper money and pour out rice gruel; while the demons scramble for the money, the doomed person may linger a little longer.!’But now immortals from Heaven have come to summon me. How could I delay the appointed hour?’ I did not quite believe her when I heard this, but after I returned and carefully watched the clock, she did indeed breathe her last at the second quarter past midday; at the third quarter someone came to call us, saying that you had returned.。”:“The times matched exactly.” Baoyu hastily said, “You cannot read books, so you do not know about such things.They truly exist. Not only is there a deity for flowers, and a separate deity for each kind of flower, but there is also a supreme Flower Goddess.?”Only, did she not say whether she had gone to be the supreme Flower Goddess or the goddess presiding over one particular kind?” At this the maid could not immediately invent an answer.It happened to be the eighth month, and the hibiscuses beside the pond in the Garden were in bloom.便:“Inspired by the sight, the maid hurriedly answered, “I asked her too which flower she would govern, so that we might know what to offer her in worship afterward.:‘She said, ‘The secrets of Heaven must not be divulged.Since you are so devout, I shall tell you alone, but you may tell only Baoyu.。’。”:“If you reveal Heaven’s secret to anyone else, the thunder of the five elements will strike your head.’ Then she told me that she had been appointed especially to govern these hibiscus flowers.” Hearing this, Baoyu not only found it unsurprising, but forgot his grief and grew joyful. Pointing to the hibiscus, he smiled. “Such a flower truly requires such a person to preside over it.I always knew that someone like her was destined for some great undertaking.。”:“。”Though she has escaped the sea of suffering and I can never see her again, I cannot help grieving and longing for her.” Then he thought, “Though I failed to see her before she died, I can at least bow before her spirit now, and so fulfill the affection of these past five or six years.”

他便带了两个小丫头到一石后,也不怎么样,只问他二人道:“自我去了,你袭人姐姐打发人瞧晴雯姐姐去了不曾?”这一个答道:“打发宋妈妈瞧去了。”宝玉道:“回来说什么?”小丫头道:“回来说晴雯姐姐直著脖子叫了一夜,今日早起就闭了眼,住了口,世事不知,也出不得一声儿,只有倒气的分儿了。”宝玉忙道:“一夜叫的是谁?”小丫头子说:“一夜叫的是娘。”宝玉拭泪道:“还叫谁?”小丫头子道:“没有听见叫别人了。”宝玉道:“你糊涂,想必没有听真。”旁边那一个小丫头最伶俐,听宝玉如此说,便上来说:“真个他糊涂。”又向宝玉道:“不但我听得真切,我还亲自偷著看去的。”宝玉听说,忙问:“你怎么又亲自看去?”小丫头道:“我因想晴雯姐姐素日与别人不同,待我们极好。如今他虽受了委屈出去,我们不能别的法子救他,只亲去瞧瞧,也不枉素日疼我们一场。就是人知道了回了太太,打我们一顿,也是愿受的。所以我拼著挨一顿打,偷著下去瞧了一瞧。谁知他平生为人聪明,至死不变。他因想著那起俗人不可说话,所以只闭眼养神,见我去了便睁开眼,拉我的手问:‘宝玉那去了?’我告诉他实情。他叹了一口气说:‘不能见了。’我就说:‘姐姐何不等一等他回来见一面,岂不两完心愿?’他就笑道:‘你们还不知道。我不是死,如今天上少了一位花神,玉皇敕命我去司主。我如今在未正二刻到任司花,宝玉须待未正三刻才到家,只少得一刻的工夫,不能见面。世上凡该死之人阎王勾取了过去,是差些小鬼来捉人魂魄。若要迟延一时半刻,不过烧些纸钱浇些浆饭,那鬼只顾抢钱去了,该死的人就可多待些个工夫。我这如今是有天上的神仙来召请,岂可挨得时刻!’我听了这话,竟不大信,及进来到房里留神看时辰表时,果然是未正二刻他咽了气,正三刻上就有人来叫我们,说你来了。这时候倒都对合。”宝玉忙道:“你不识字看书,所以不知道。这原是有的,不但花有个神,一样花有一位神之外还有总花神。但他不知是作总花神去了,还是单管一样花的神?”这丫头听了,一时诌不出来。恰好这是八月时节,园中池上芙蓉正开。这丫头便见景生情,忙答道:“我也曾问他是管什么花的神,告诉我们日后也好供养的。他说:‘天机不可泄漏。你既这样虔诚,我只告诉你,你只可告诉宝玉一人。除他之外若泄了天机,五雷就来轰顶的。’他就告诉我说,他就是专管这芙蓉花的。”宝玉听了这话,不但不为怪,亦且去悲而生喜,乃指芙蓉笑道:“此花也须得这样一个人去司掌。我就料定他那样的人必有一番事业做的。虽然超出苦海,从此不能相见,也免不得伤感思念。”因又想:“虽然临终未见,如今且去灵前一拜,也算尽这五六年的情常。”

穿Having made up his mind, he hurried back to his rooms and changed his clothes again. Saying only that he was going to see Daiyu, he left the Garden alone and went to the place where he had visited Qingwen before, supposing that her coffin would be resting there.便But as soon as she breathed her last, her brother and sister-in-law had gone to report the death, hoping to obtain the customary funeral allowance as soon as possible.便When Lady Wang heard, she ordered that ten taels be given for the cremation and burial expenses.:“She also ordered, “Have her taken outside the city and cremated at once.!”A girl who dies of consumption must on no account be kept here!” On hearing this, her brother and sister-in-law received the money and at once hired men to place her in a coffin and carry her to the cremation ground outside the city.The clothes, shoes, hairpins, and ornaments she left, worth some three or four hundred in silver, were retained by her brother and sister-in-law against their future needs.They locked the door and went together to accompany the funeral procession, and had not yet returned.Thus Baoyu came all that way only to find the place deserted.He stood there alone for a long while, but there was nothing he could do, so he had to turn back into the Garden.On his way to his rooms he felt utterly dispirited, and therefore stopped along the way to look for Daiyu.:“。”As ill luck would have it, Daiyu was not in her rooms. When he asked where she had gone, the maids replied, “She has gone to Miss Bao’s.” Baoyu went on to Hengwu Court, only to find it silent and deserted, with the rooms stripped bare. He could not help receiving a terrible shock.Just then an older serving-woman appeared, and Baoyu hurriedly asked what had happened.:““Miss Bao has moved out,” the woman replied.The place has been left in our care, but everything has not yet been cleared away.西We have helped carry some of her things over, and are just about finished.。”Please go out, young master, so that we may sweep away the dust. From now on, you may spare yourself the trouble of walking over here.” Baoyu stood stunned for a long while. Looking at the fragrant vines and exotic creepers in the courtyard, still lush and green, he suddenly felt that, compared with yesterday, the place had somehow become desolate, adding still more to his sorrow.He came out in silence, and saw that for half the day no one had passed along the emerald-shaded causeway outside the gate—nothing like former days, when maids from all the different apartments would arrive unbidden in an endless stream.Bending down, he looked at the water beneath the causeway; it still flowed gently and silently on.:“!”He thought, “Can there truly be such heartless things under heaven and earth!” After grieving awhile, it suddenly occurred to him that Siqi, Ruhua, Fangguan, and two others had been sent away; Qingwen was dead; now Baochai and her household had gone too; and though Yingchun had not yet left, she had not returned for several days, while matchmakers had been coming one after another to propose marriages. In all likelihood, before long everyone in the Garden would be scattered.Vexing himself would do no good.He might as well seek out Daiyu and spend the day with her, then come back and keep Xiren company; these two or three, at least, would probably remain together until death.Having decided this, he went on to Xiaoxiang Lodge, only to find that Daiyu had still not returned.Baoyu thought he ought to go out and wait to see the travelers off, but he could not bear the sorrow of it and decided not to go; he therefore returned, downcast and dispirited.

想毕忙至房中,又另穿戴了,只说去看黛玉,遂一人出园来,往前次之处去,意为停柩在内。谁知他哥嫂见他一咽气便回了进去,希图早些得几两发送例银。王夫人闻知,便命赏了十两烧埋银子。又命:“即刻送到外头焚化了罢。女儿痨死的,断不可留!”他哥嫂听了这话,一面得银,一面就雇了人来入殓,抬往城外化人场上去了。剩的衣履簪环,约有三四百金之数,他兄嫂自收了为后日之计。二人将门锁上,一同送殡去未回。宝玉走来扑了个空。宝玉自立了半天,别无法儿,只得复身进入园中。待回至房中,甚觉无味,因乃顺路来找黛玉。偏黛玉不在房中,问其何往,丫鬟们回说:“往宝姑娘那里去了。”宝玉又至蘅芜苑中,只见寂静无人,房内搬的空空落落的,不觉吃一大惊。忽见个老婆子走来,宝玉忙问这是什么原故。老婆子道:“宝姑娘出去了。这里交我们看著,还没有搬清楚。我们帮著送了些东西去,这也就完了。你老人家请出去罢,让我们扫扫灰尘也好,从此你老人家省跑这一处的腿子了。”宝玉听了,怔了半天,因看著那院中的香藤异蔓,仍是翠翠青青,忽比昨日好似改作凄凉了一般,更又添了伤感。默默出来,又见门外的一条翠樾埭上也半日无人来往,不似当日各处房中丫鬟不约而来者络绎不绝。又俯身看那埭下之水,仍是溶溶脉脉的流将过去。心下因想:“天地间竟有这样无情的事!”悲感一番,忽又想到去了司棋,入画,芳官等五个,死了晴雯,今又去了宝钗等一处,迎春虽尚未去,然连日也不见回来,且接连有媒人来求亲:大约园中之人不久都要散的了。纵生烦恼,也无济于事。不如还是找黛玉去相伴一日,回来还是和袭人厮混,只这两三个人,只怕还是同死同归的。想毕,仍往潇湘馆来,偏黛玉尚未回来。宝玉想亦当出去候送才是,无奈不忍悲感,还是不去的是,遂又垂头丧气的回来。

:“While he stood at a loss, one of Lady Wang’s maids suddenly came looking for him and said, “Master has returned and is asking for you; he has brought back another fine subject.。”Come quickly, quickly.” Hearing this, Baoyu had no choice but to follow her out.By the time he reached Lady Wang’s room, his father had already left it.Lady Wang ordered someone to escort Baoyu to the study.

正在不知所以之际,忽见王夫人的丫头进来找他说:“老爷回来了,找你呢,又得了好题目来了。快走,快走。”宝玉听了,只得跟了出来。到王夫人房中,他父亲已出去了。王夫人命人送宝玉至书房中。

:“,‘。”At that moment Jia Zheng was discussing the delights of an autumn excursion with his secretaries, and said, “Just as we were about to disperse, a certain affair unexpectedly came up. It makes one of the finest tales in all history, possessing in full the qualities ‘romantic and distinguished, loyal and heroic.’ It is an excellent subject: each of you should compose a lament.” On hearing this, the secretaries eagerly asked what marvelous affair he meant.:“Jia Zheng said, “There was once a prince entitled Prince Heng, who was posted to command at Qingzhou.This Prince Heng was exceedingly fond of women and, in his leisure from official business, devoted to martial pursuits; he therefore selected a great many beautiful women and had them practice the arts of war each day.Whenever free from his duties, he would hold banquets lasting several days and have these beauties train in combat, feats of strength, and the like.姿Among his concubines was a woman surnamed Lin, the fourth in order; she surpassed all the others in beauty and was even more accomplished in arms, so everyone called her Lin Siniang.嫿’。“Prince Heng was especially pleased with her, and promoted Lin Siniang to command all the other women, also styling her ‘General Guihua.’” The assembled literary retainers all exclaimed, “How wonderfully ingenious!嫿By adding the two words ‘general’ after ‘guihua,’ the title becomes all the more charming and romantic—a truly matchless turn of phrase.。”:“。”:“?”:“便’‘One would think this Prince Heng himself the foremost romantic figure of all the ages.” Jia Zheng laughed. “That is naturally true, but there is something still more extraordinary and moving.” The retainers stared in astonishment and asked, “What extraordinary event followed?” Jia Zheng said, “Who would have thought that the next year remnants of such rebels as the ‘Yellow Turbans’ and ‘Red Eyebrows’ would gather into another rabble and plunder the region east of the Taihang Mountains?Prince Heng considered them no more than a pack of vile curs and sheep, unworthy of a major expedition, and rode out with a small cavalry force to suppress them.Unexpectedly, the rebels possessed considerable cunning and strategy; after failing to defeat them in two engagements, Prince Heng was slain by the mob.!’The civil and military officials within Qingzhou then all said, ‘If even the Prince could not prevail, what can we do?’ and were on the point of surrendering the city.:‘When Lin Siniang heard the dreadful news, she assembled all the women warriors and issued this command: ‘We have all long enjoyed the Prince’s favor; while we live beneath heaven and tread the earth, we cannot repay even one ten-thousandth of it.Now that the Prince has given his life in the service of the realm, I intend to give my life for him.。’Any of you willing to follow me, come with me at once; those unwilling may disperse while there is still time.’ On hearing this, the women warriors unanimously declared themselves willing.So Lin Siniang led them out of the city that very night and fought her way straight into the rebel camp.The rebels were caught unprepared, and several of their chiefs were cut down.But when they saw that their attackers were only a few women and could achieve nothing in the end, they turned their weapons upon them and fought with all their strength, leaving not one of Lin Siniang’s band alive; and so they brought Lin Siniang’s wholehearted loyalty and valor to perfect fulfillment.When the report later reached the imperial capital, everyone from the Emperor down to the hundred officials was amazed and marveled at it.Naturally, troops were later sent from the court to suppress the rebels; as soon as the imperial army arrived, they vanished into nothing, and need not be discussed at length.?”:“。”便But as for Lin Siniang alone, gentlemen, having heard her story, do you not find her admirable?” All the secretaries sighed. “She is truly admirable and extraordinary. It is indeed a splendid subject, and only proper that each of us should lament her.” As they spoke, someone had already fetched brush and inkstone and, slightly altering a few words of Jia Zheng’s account, made it into a short preface and handed it to Jia Zheng for inspection.:“Jia Zheng said, “That is the substance of it.They already have the original preface there.Yesterday another gracious edict was received, ordering an investigation into all persons since former dynasties who deserved commendation but had been overlooked and never memorialized—whether monks, nuns, beggars, women, or any others—and directing that, if a single deed of theirs were worthy of praise, their biographies should immediately be compiled and sent to the Ministry of Rites for consideration of an imperial award.That is why their original preface has also been sent to the Ministry of Rites.嫿》,。”:“Everyone heard this news, and so they all wish to compose a ‘Ballad of Guihua’ to commemorate her loyalty and valor.” The others laughed again. “That is just as it should be.’,Still more admirable are the unprecedented ordinances and magnificent favors of our own dynasty, surpassing every former age. Truly, ‘under a sage dynasty no worthy deed is overlooked’: a poet of the Tang anticipated the words, but it is in our dynasty that they have been fulfilled.。”:“。”Only in our present age does that line cease to be empty praise.” Jia Zheng nodded. “Precisely.”

彼时贾政正与众幕友们谈论寻秋之胜,又说:“快散时忽然谈及一事,最是千古佳谈,‘风流隽逸,忠义慷慨’八字皆备,倒是个好题目,大家要作一首挽词。”众幕宾听了,都忙请教是系何等妙事。贾政乃道:“当日曾有一位王封曰恒王,出镇青州。这恒王最喜女色,且公余好武,因选了许多美女,日习武事。每公余辄开宴连日,令众美女习战斗功拔之事。其姬中有姓林行四者,姿色既冠,且武艺更精,皆呼为林四娘。恒王最得意,遂超拔林四娘统辖诸姬,又呼为‘姽婳将军’。“众清客都称”妙极神奇。竟以‘姽婳’下加‘将军’二字,反更觉妩媚风流,真绝世奇文也。想这恒王也是千古第一风流人物了。”贾政笑道:“这话自然是如此,但更有可奇可叹之事。”众清客都愕然惊问道:“不知底下有何奇事?”贾政道:“谁知次年便有‘黄巾’‘赤眉’一干流贼余党复又乌合,抢掠山左一带。恒王意为犬羊之恶,不足大举,因轻骑前剿。不意贼众颇有诡谲智术,两战不胜,恒王遂为众贼所戮。于是青州城内文武官员,各各皆谓‘王尚不胜,你我何为!’遂将有献城之举。林四娘得闻凶报,遂集聚众女将,发令说道:‘你我皆向蒙王恩,戴天履地,不能报其万一。今王既殒身国事,我意亦当殒身于王。尔等有愿随者,即时同我前往,有不愿者,亦早各散。’众女将听他这样,都一齐说愿意。于是林四娘带领众人连夜出城,直杀至贼营里头。众贼不防,也被斩戮了几员首贼。然后大家见是不过几个女人,料不能济事,遂回戈倒兵,奋力一阵,把林四娘等一个不曾留下,倒作成了这林四娘的一片忠义之志。后来报至中都,自天子以至百官,无不惊骇道奇。其后朝中自然又有人去剿灭,天兵一到,化为乌有,不必深论。只就林四娘一节,众位听了,可羡不可羡呢?”众幕友都叹道:“实在可羡可奇,实是个妙题,原该大家挽一挽才是。”说著,早有人取了笔砚,按贾政口中之言稍加改易了几个字,便成了一篇短序,递与贾政看了。贾政道:“不过如此。他们那里已有原序。昨日因又奉恩旨,著察核前代以来应加褒奖而遗落未经请奏各项人等,无论僧尼乞丐与女妇人等,有一事可嘉,即行汇送履历至礼部备请恩奖。所以他这原序也送往礼部去了。大家听见这新闻,所以都要作一首《姽婳词》,以志其忠义。”众人听了,都又笑道:“这原该如此。只是更可羡者,本朝皆系千古未有之旷典隆恩,实历代所不及处,可谓‘圣朝无阙事’,唐朝人预先竟说了,竟应在本朝。如今年代方不虚此一句。”贾政点头道:“正是。”

While they were speaking, Jia Huan and Jia Lan, uncle and nephew, also arrived.Jia Zheng had them read the subject.Though both could write verse and, as far as the actual store of learning in their bellies went, were not far behind Baoyu, they differed from him in two respects: first, they followed another path altogether—in preparation for the civil examinations they seemed superior to Baoyu, but in miscellaneous learning they fell far short of him; second, their talents were sluggish and dull, lacking Baoyu’s quick, graceful imagination, and even their poetry followed the method of the eight-legged essay, making it inevitably rigid, commonplace, and labored.Baoyu could not be called a scholar, but fortunately he was naturally intelligent and had always enjoyed miscellaneous books. He believed that even the ancients sometimes invented things and sometimes made mistakes, and that one could not be too exacting about every detail; if one was forever timidly looking before and behind, then even a composition laboriously pieced together would be exceedingly dull.怀便With this notion always in mind, whenever he encountered a subject, difficult or easy, he composed without the least effort, rather like those glib-tongued fellows in the world who manufacture something out of nothing and, trusting to their nimble speech, ramble on at length, dragging in all manner of nonsense until they have spun out a whole discourse.Though nothing they said could bear investigation, they spoke so engagingly that everyone present felt as if refreshed by a spring breeze.Even stern and righteous speakers could not suppress such charm.In recent years Jia Zheng had grown old and become thoroughly disillusioned with fame and profit; yet by nature he too had originally been a free and unconventional lover of poetry and wine, though among the younger generation he could not avoid guiding them along the orthodox path.Lately, seeing that although Baoyu would not study the classics he had a considerable understanding of such matters, Jia Zheng judged on reflection that the boy did not altogether disgrace his ancestors.When he thought of those ancestors, he saw that each had been much the same: though some had been deeply accomplished in examination learning, not one had ever risen to eminence by it; this, it seemed, was the destiny of the Jia house.Besides, his mother doted on the boy, so he no longer forced him toward the examinations.This was why he treated him in this fashion nowadays.He also wished that Huan and Lan, besides pursuing their examination studies, might somehow become like Baoyu; therefore, whenever he wanted poetry composed, he invariably summoned all three to compete.

说话间,贾环叔侄亦到。贾政命他们看了题目。他两个虽能诗,较腹中之虚实虽也去宝玉不远,但第一件他两个终是别路,若论举业一道,似高过宝玉,若论杂学,则远不能及,第二件他二人才思滞钝,不及宝玉空灵娟逸,每作诗亦如八股之法,未免拘板庸涩。那宝玉虽不算是个读书人,然亏他天性聪敏,且素喜好些杂书,他自为古人中也有杜撰的,也有误失之处,拘较不得许多,若只管怕前怕后起来,纵堆砌成一篇,也觉得甚无趣味。因心里怀著这个念头,每见一题,不拘难易,他便毫无费力之处,就如世上的流嘴滑舌之人,无风作有,信著伶口俐舌,长篇大论,胡扳乱扯,敷演出一篇话来。虽无稽考,却都说得四座春风。虽有正言厉语之人,亦不得压倒这一种风流去。近日贾政年迈,名利大灰,然起初天性也是个诗酒放诞之人,因在子侄辈中,少不得规以正路。近见宝玉虽不读书,竟颇能解此,细评起来,也还不算十分玷辱了祖宗。就思及祖宗们,各各亦皆如此,虽有深精举业的,也不曾发迹过一个,看来此亦贾门之数。况母亲溺爱,遂也不强以举业逼他了。所以近日是这等待他。又要环兰二人举业之余,怎得亦同宝玉才好,所以每欲作诗,必将三人一齐唤来对作。

But enough of this digression.Jia Zheng now ordered each of the three to compose a lament, promising a reward to the first to finish and an additional prize for the best.Jia Huan and Jia Lan had lately composed several poems before large gatherings and had grown much bolder; now, having read the subject, they each withdrew into thought.Before long, Jia Lan had his poem.Jia Huan, afraid of falling behind, soon had his as well.Both had already written theirs out, while Baoyu was still lost in thought.Jia Zheng and the others therefore first examined the two poems.Jia Lan’s was a seven-character quatrain and ran as follows:

闲言少述。且说贾政又命他三人各吊一首,谁先成者赏,佳者额外加赏。贾环贾兰二人近日当著多人皆作过几首了,胆量逾壮,今看了题,遂自去思索。一时,贾兰先有了。贾环生恐落后也就有了。二人皆已录出,宝玉尚出神。贾政与众人且看他二人的二首。贾兰的是一首七言绝,写道是:

便:“。”:“。”After reading it, the secretaries all praised it highly: “For a young gentleman of thirteen to write like this shows the profound tradition of learning in his family; its reputation is truly deserved.” Jia Zheng smiled. “It is merely the speech of a child, though he has done creditably.” They next read Jia Huan’s, a regulated verse in five-character lines, which ran as follows:

众幕宾看了,便皆大赞:“小哥儿十三岁的人就如此,可知家学渊源,真不诬矣。”贾政笑道:“稚子口角,也还难为他。”又看贾环的,是首五言律,写道是:

:“The others said, “This is better still.。”:“。”:“Being several years older, he naturally conceives the subject differently.” Jia Zheng said, “There are no serious faults, but it is not heartfelt enough.” The others replied, “Surely this will do.。”:“Third Young Master is only a little over two years older; to write like this before even coming of age—once he has applied himself for a few more years, will he not become another Elder Ruan and Younger Ruan?” Jia Zheng said, “You praise him too highly.。”His only failing is his unwillingness to study.” He then asked how Baoyu was progressing.:“。”:“。”:“The others said, “Second Young Master is carving and polishing his lines with care; his poem is sure to be romantic and sorrowful, quite unlike these.” Baoyu smiled. “This subject does not seem suited to regulated verse. It requires the ancient style—a song or ballad, and a long one at that—if the feeling is to be fully expressed.” Hearing this, everyone rose, nodded, clapped, and cried, “Just as I said, his conception is different!便Whenever he receives a subject, he first considers what form will or will not suit it: that is the subtle method of an old hand.It is like cutting clothes: before applying the shears, one must take the wearer’s measurements.嫿》,This subject is entitled ‘Ballad of Guihua,’ and since it already has a preface, only a long song or ballad can properly suit the form.》,。”:“It might imitate Bai Letian’s ‘Song of Everlasting Sorrow,’ or some ode on antiquity, half narrative and half lyrical; only if fluent, light, and soaring can it approach perfection.” This accorded with Jia Zheng’s own view. He picked up his brush and prepared to write, then smiled at Baoyu. “Very well: you dictate and I shall write.If it is no good, I shall pound that flesh of yours.!”Who gave you leave to boast so shamelessly beforehand?” Baoyu had no choice but to dictate his first line, which ran:

众人道:“更佳。倒是大几岁年纪,立意又自不同。”贾政道:“还不甚大错,终不恳切。”众人道:“这就罢了。三爷才大不多两岁,在未冠之时如此,用了工夫,再过几年,怕不是大阮小阮了。”贾政道:“过奖了。只是不肯读书过失。”因又问宝玉怎样。众人道:“二爷细心镂刻,定又是风流悲感,不同此等的了。”宝玉笑道:“这个题目似不称近体,须得古体,或歌或行,长篇一首,方能恳切。”众人听了,都立身点头拍手道:“我说他立意不同!每一题到手必先度其体格宜与不宜,这便是老手妙法。就如裁衣一般,未下剪时,须度其身量。这题目名曰《姽婳词》,且既有了序,此必是长篇歌行方合体的。或拟白乐天《长恨歌》,或拟咏古词,半叙半咏,流利飘逸,始能近妙。”贾政听说,也合了主意,遂自提笔向纸上要写,又向宝玉笑道:“如此,你念我写。不好了,我捶你那肉。谁许你先大言不惭了!”宝玉只得念了一句,道是:

:“。”:“Jia Zheng wrote it down, looked at it, and shook his head. “Coarse and vulgar.” One secretary said, “It needs to be like this to sound ancient; it is not truly coarse.。”:“。”Let us hear what follows.” Jia Zheng said, “We shall leave it for now.” Baoyu continued:

贾政写了看时,摇头道:“粗鄙。”一幕宾道:“要这样方古,究竟不粗。且看他底下的。”贾政道:“姑存之。”宝玉又道:

:“便Jia Zheng wrote the lines down, and everyone said, “This third line alone is archaic, simple, mature, and vigorous—truly excellent.。”:“。”These four lines provide a plain narrative opening, which is also perfectly appropriate.” Jia Zheng said, “Do not heap absurd praise upon him; let us see how he makes the transition.” Baoyu recited:

贾政写出,众人都道:“只这第三句便古朴老健,极妙。这四句平叙出,也最得体。”贾政道:“休谬加奖誉,且看转的如何。”宝玉念道:

便:“On hearing these two lines, everyone cried, “Wonderful!’!What an excellent phrase, ‘no dust of battle could be seen rising’!’,。”And it is followed by ‘graceful shadows within the red lamplight’: both wording and phrasing have attained the marvelous.” Baoyu went on:

众人听了这两句,便都叫:“妙!好个‘不见尘沙起’!又承了一句‘俏影红灯里’,用字用句,皆入神化了。”宝玉道:

便:“Hearing this, they clapped and laughed. “The picture grows more vivid still.Could it be that Master Bao himself attended those gatherings, seeing their charms and breathing their fragrance?。”:“Otherwise, how could he describe them with such intimate understanding?” Baoyu smiled. “However brave and fierce women training in arms within their chambers may be, how can they resemble men?。”:“。”One need not ask to know their delicate, timid appearance.” Jia Zheng said, “Hurry up and continue! Must you start boasting again?” Baoyu thought for a moment and recited:

众人听了,便拍手笑道:“益发画出来了。当日敢是宝公也在座,见其娇且闻其香否?不然,何体贴至此。”宝玉笑道:“闺阁习武,任其勇悍,怎似男人。不待问而可知娇怯之形的了。”贾政道:“还不快续,这又有你说嘴的了。”宝玉只得又想了一想,念道:

:“’,‘Everyone said, “The change to the ‘tao’ and ‘xiao’ rhymes is finer still; now the verse truly flows and soars.。”:“And this line is exquisitely ornate and graceful.” Jia Zheng wrote it down, then looked at it and said, “This line is poor.’‘’,You have already written of ‘fragrant breath’ and of their ‘delicate difficulty in lifting’ their weapons; why repeat yourself?。”:“便。”:“You lack the strength to proceed, and so are fobbing us off with this sort of piled-up ornament.” Baoyu smiled. “A long song needs some decorative diction here and there; otherwise it feels bleak and bare.” Jia Zheng said, “You think only of using such phrases, but after this line how can you turn to martial action?。”:“。”:“If you add another couple of lines, will they not be superfluous?” Baoyu said, “In that case, I believe the next line can make the turn and bring this passage to a close at once.” Jia Zheng sneered. “And how much ability do you possess?。”Above, you have written a loose, wide-opening line; now you want a single line both to make the turn and close the passage. Is not your ambition somewhat greater than your power?” Hearing this, Baoyu lowered his head, thought awhile, and gave a line:

众人都道:“转‘绦’,‘萧’韵,更妙,这才流利飘荡。而且这一句也绮靡秀媚的妙。”贾政写了,看道:“这一句不好。已写过‘口舌香’‘娇难举’,何必又如此。这是力量不加,故又用这些堆砌货来搪塞。”宝玉笑道:“长歌也须得要些词藻点缀点缀,不然便觉萧索。”贾政道:“你只顾用这些,但这一句底下如何能转至武事?若再多说两句,岂不蛇足了。”宝玉道:“如此,底下一句转煞住,想亦可矣。”贾政冷笑道:“你有多大本领?上头说了一句大开门的散话,如今又要一句连转带煞,岂不心有余而力不足些。”宝玉听了,垂头想了一想,说了一句道:

:“使?”He hurriedly asked, “Will this line do?” Everyone struck the table and acclaimed it superb.:“。”:“使便Jia Zheng wrote it down, smiled as he looked at it, and said, “Leave it there for now; continue.” Baoyu said, “If it will do, I shall go straight on in one breath.使。”便:“If not, we might as well cross it out entirely; I shall think of another approach and phrase it afresh.” Jia Zheng shouted, “Too much talk!便!”便If it is no good, write it again—write ten versions or a hundred! Are you afraid of a little trouble?” Hearing this, Baoyu thought for a while and recited:

忙问:“这一句可还使得?”众人拍案叫绝。贾政写了,看著笑道:“且放著,再续。”宝玉道:“若使得,我便要一气下去了。若使不得,越性涂了,我再想别的意思出来,再另措词。”贾政听了,便喝道:“多话!不好了再作,便作十篇百篇,还怕辛苦了不成!”宝玉听说,只得想了一会,便念道:

:“Jia Zheng said, “There is another section.?”What comes next?” Baoyu replied:

贾政道:“又一段。底下怎样?”宝玉道:

:“The others said, “What an excellent use of the word ‘fled’!便It immediately reveals the difference between the two sides.。”And the turn of the whole line is not at all stiff.” Baoyu continued:

众人道:“好个‘走’字!便见得高低了。且通句转的也不板。”宝玉又念道:

:“Everyone cried, “Marvelous, marvelous!The arrangement, narrative, and diction are all flawless.。”Now let us see how he reaches Siniang; there must surely be another ingenious turn and some extraordinary lines.” Baoyu continued:

众人都道:“妙极,妙极!布置,叙事,词藻,无不尽美。且看如何至四娘,必另有妙转奇句。”宝玉又念道:

:“。”:“。”Everyone said, “The narrative unfolds with admirable subtlety.” Jia Zheng said, “There is too much of it; I fear what follows will become cumbersome.” Baoyu then continued:

众人都道:“铺叙得委婉。”贾政道:“太多了,底下只怕累赘呢。”宝玉乃又念道:

When he had finished, everyone praised it without cease, and then read the whole poem through again from the beginning.:“。”:“。”Jia Zheng smiled. “Though you have managed several lines, in the end it is not deeply felt.” Then he said, “You may go.” The three went out together as though granted a reprieve, and each returned to his room.

念毕,众人都大赞不止,又都从头看了一遍。贾政笑道:“虽然说了几句,到底不大恳切。”因说:“去罢。”三人如得了赦的一般,一齐出来,各自回房。

Nothing else of note occurred, and by evening everyone retired to rest.Baoyu alone remained heartsick. Returning to the Garden, he suddenly saw the hibiscus blossoms beside the pond and remembered the little maid’s saying that Qingwen had become the Goddess of the Hibiscus. At once his spirits rose, and he gazed at the flowers and sighed over them for a time.It then occurred to him that since her death he had not offered a sacrifice before her spirit; why not sacrifice before the hibiscus now? That would fully discharge the rites and be far more distinctive than the vulgar custom of going to mourn before the dead person’s shrine.便Having decided this, he was about to perform the ceremony.:“。”,”But he suddenly stopped and said, “Even so, I must not act too hastily. My dress and cap must be in order and the offerings complete; only then will it show sincerity and reverence.” After some thought, he continued, “It is absolutely impossible to imitate the commonplace sacrificial rites of the world. I must devise something new, arrange a ceremony of my own—elegant, extraordinary, and unconnected with worldly convention—so as not to prove unworthy of what the two of us are.:“。’Moreover, the ancients said: ‘Even water from a ditch or roadside pool, and humble duckweed, southernwood, pondweed, and water-grass, may be offered to princes and presented to ghosts and gods.’ The value or cheapness of the objects never mattered; all depends upon sincerity and reverence of heart.That is the first consideration.使Second, the funeral encomium and lament must present ideas of my own and display an independent vision. I must not follow the stock formulas of earlier writers, filling in a few words merely to fob off eyes and ears. I must shed tears and weep blood, choking over every character and sobbing over every sentence; better that the writing fall short while grief overflows than that I prize literary ornament and thereby lose the sorrow.Besides, the ancients often used veiled criticism; I shall not be the first to set such a precedent.Unfortunately, people today are wholly deluded by the words ‘rank and fame.’ The ancient spirit has been swept entirely away, for fear that it may be unfashionable and hinder their advancement.》、《》、《》、《》、《》、《》、《》、《。”But I care nothing for rank or fame and do not write to be read and praised by the world. Why should I not take as my distant models the methods of the Chu authors’ ‘Grand Words,’ ‘Summons of the Soul,’ ‘Encountering Sorrow,’ and ‘Nine Arguments,’ together with ‘The Withered Tree,’ ‘Questions and Difficulties,’ ‘Autumn Floods,’ and ‘Biography of Master Great Man’? I may mingle isolated lines, form occasional brief couplets, employ genuine allusions, or devise allegories and comparisons; I shall go wherever inclination leads and let my brush run freely. In joy I shall make sport with literature, and in sorrow use words to record my pain, stopping only when the words have conveyed the sense in full. Why must I be confined, like worldly writers, within a few cramped inches?” Baoyu was no scholar to begin with, and with this perverse notion in his mind, how could he produce good poetry or prose?》,Yet he compiled it as he pleased, with no thought of winning anyone’s admiration; therefore he gave free rein to wild extravagance and concocted a long composition. He wrote it neatly upon a length of the ice-silk gauze Qingwen had loved in life and entitled it “Encomium for the Hibiscus Maiden,” with a preface followed by a song.He also prepared four things Qingwen had especially liked, and by moonlight that night ordered the little maid to carry them before the hibiscus flowers.After first completing the ritual bows, he hung the encomium upon a hibiscus branch, then wept and read aloud:

众人皆无别话,不过至晚安歇而已。独有宝玉一心凄楚,回至园中,猛然见池上芙蓉,想起小丫鬟说晴雯作了芙蓉之神,不觉又喜欢起来,乃看著芙蓉嗟叹了一会。忽又想起死后并未到灵前一祭,如今何不在芙蓉前一祭,岂不尽了礼,比俗人去灵前祭吊又更觉别致。想毕,便欲行礼。忽又止住道:“虽如此,亦不可太草率,也须得衣冠整齐,奠仪周备,方为诚敬。”想了一想,”如今若学那世俗之奠礼,断然不可,竟也还别开生面,另立排场,风流奇异,于世无涉,方不负我二人之为人。况且古人有云:“潢污行潦,苹蘩蕴藻之贱,可以羞王公,荐鬼神。’原不在物之贵贱,全在心之诚敬而已。此其一也。二则诔文挽词也须另出己见,自放手眼,亦不可蹈袭前人的套头,填写几字搪塞耳目之文,亦必须洒泪泣血,一字一咽,一句一啼,宁使文不足悲有余,万不可尚文藻而反失悲戚。况且古人多有微词,非自我今作俑也。奈今人全惑于功名二字,尚古之风一洗皆尽,恐不合时宜,于功名有碍之故。我又不希罕那功名,不为世人观阅称赞,何必不远师楚人之《大言》、《招魂》、《离骚》、《九辩》、《枯树》、《问难》、《秋水》、《大人先生传》等法,或杂参单句,或偶成短联,或用实典,或设譬寓,随意所之,信笔而去,喜则以文为戏,悲则以言志痛,辞达意尽为止,何必若世俗之拘拘于方寸之间哉。”宝玉本是个不读书之人,再心中有了这篇歪意,怎得有好诗文作出来。他自己却任意纂著,并不为人知慕,所以大肆妄诞,竟杜撰成一篇长文,用晴雯素日所喜之冰鲛谷一幅楷字写成,名曰《芙蓉女儿诔》,前序后歌。又备了四样晴雯所喜之物,于是夜月下,命那小丫头捧至芙蓉花前。先行礼毕,将那诔文即挂于芙蓉枝上,乃泣涕念曰:

In the first year of an era when peace is not easily won, in the month when hibiscus and cassia vie in fragrance, on this day of helpless grief, Zhuoyu of Yihong Court reverently offers the essences of many flowers, a length of ice-silk gauze, water from Qinfang Stream, and maple-dew tea. Though these four gifts are humble, they may serve to express my sincerity and attest my faith. I therefore present this sacrifice before the Hibiscus Maiden, who in the Palace of the White Emperor presides over the autumn’s loveliness, saying:

维太平不易之元,蓉桂竞芳之月,无可奈何之日,怡红院浊玉,谨以群花之蕊、冰鲛之縠、沁芳之泉、枫露之茗,四者虽微,聊以达诚申信,乃致祭于白帝宫中抚司秋艳芙蓉女儿之前曰:

I reflect that since the Maiden descended into this turbid world, sixteen years in all have passed.The native place, family name, and personal name of her ancestors have long been lost to oblivion, beyond all possibility of inquiry.Yet the time I was granted to spend with you amid quilts and pillows, combing and bathing, in evenings of rest and pleasure—intimate, familiar, and ever together—was no more than five years and eight months.I recall your former life as a maiden: in substance, even gold and jade could not express your worth; in nature, even ice and snow could not express your purity; in spirit, even the stars and sun could not express your brilliance; in beauty, even flowers and the moon could not express your loveliness.All the young ladies admired your grace and virtue, and every old nurse revered your kindness.Who could have foreseen that foul doves and venomous birds, hating your lofty nature, would ensnare the hawk in their nets; that rank weeds, jealous of your fragrance, would have angelica and orchid cut down by the hoe!A flower is frail by nature—how could it withstand a raging gale? A willow is sorrowful by nature—how could it endure a sudden rainstorm?Once assailed by the slanders of venomous creatures, you fell prey to a mortal illness.Thus the red faded from your cherry lips, and their melodious speech became a moan; the fragrance withered from your apricot cheeks, and their beauty turned gaunt and sallow. Calumny, ridicule, and abuse issued from behind the inner curtains, while thorns and brambles spread across doors and windows.You did not perish by inviting blame; in truth, you died resisting disgrace.Already sunk in endless grief, you bore in addition an infinity of false charges and wrongs.Your lofty character aroused envy: within the women's chambers your wrongs surpassed those of the exile at Changsha; your forthright courage brought peril: though a woman, your fate was more tragic than Gun's on the plains of Yu.You kept all bitterness within yourself—who took pity on your untimely death!Now the immortal cloud has dispersed, and no trace of your fragrant steps can be found.The isle of Juku is lost in mist—whence could come its incense that restores the dead?The spirit raft is lost at sea, and no life-restoring elixir can be obtained.The smoky blue of your painted brows—only yesterday I traced it for you; the jade rings upon your fingers are cold—who will warm them now?The medicine left in the tripod furnace still remains, and the lingering stains of tears upon my robe are not yet dry.The mirror is split and the paired phoenixes parted; in sorrow I open Sheyue's dressing case. The comb has changed into a dragon and flown away; in grief I mourn the broken teeth of Tanyun's sandalwood comb.Your golden hairpins lie abandoned in the wild grass, your kingfisher-feather headdress picked up from the dust.The Zhique Tower stands empty, with the needle for the Seventh Night hanging there in vain; the mandarin-duck sash is broken—who will join its threads with a five-colored cord?And now the season belongs to the golden heavens, the White Emperor governs the hour; dreams haunt a solitary quilt, but the empty room holds no one.The moon is dim upon the steps beneath the paulownia; your fragrant soul has vanished together with your lovely shadow. The scent has faded from the hibiscus bed-curtains; your tender breathing and soft words have both ceased.Withered grasses stretch to the sky—not reeds alone; sorrowful sounds fill the earth, and all are the cries of crickets.穿Dew lies on the moss of the evening steps; the cold beat of the fulling block cannot pierce the curtain. Rain darkens the creepers on the autumn wall; across the courtyard, scarcely a plaintive flute is heard.Your fragrant name has not yet faded: the parrot beneath the eaves still calls you. Yet your lovely form is about to perish: the crab apple beyond the balustrade has withered before its time.Behind the screen where we played hide-and-seek, your lotus-petal feet make no sound; before the courtyard where we matched plants, the orchid shoots await you in vain.The embroidery thread lies cast aside and unfinished—who will cut the silver paper and colored strands?The icy strings have snapped; the imperial incense in the golden iron remains unpressed.Yesterday, obeying a stern command, I hastened to the carriage and journeyed far from the fragrant garden; today, defying parental authority, I have taken up my staff and abruptly left your lonely bier.When I heard that your frail coffin had been consumed by fire, I was ashamed to have broken our pledge to share one grave; when even the stone outer coffin met disaster, I blushed to incur the reproach that our ashes were not mingled.西And so, by an ancient temple in the west wind, ghostly blue flames linger; upon a desolate mound in the setting sun, white bones lie scattered.The catalpas and elms rustle mournfully; the wormwood and wild grasses sigh.Beyond the misty graveyard apes cry; around the smoke-veiled paths ghosts weep.I once thought that within the red gauze curtains a young lord's love was deep; only now do I believe that beneath a mound of yellow earth a maiden's fate is cruel!西Like the blood-tears of Runan, my tears fall, stain upon stain, into the west wind; with the devotion that lingered at Zize, I silently confide my grief to the cold moon.Alas!Truly this calamity was the work of fiends and monsters—could the gods and spirits also have been jealous?忿If I could clamp shut the mouths of those deceitful slaves, no punishment would be too severe; if I could cut out the hearts of those shrewish women, my rage would still not be appeased!Though your mortal bond with this world was brief, my humble devotion to you shall never end.Harboring these earnest thoughts, I cannot refrain from asking again and again.Only now do I know that the Lord of Heaven has lowered his banner and summoned you to serve in the Palace of Flowers: in life you were the peer of orchids and angelica; in death you rule over hibiscus blossoms.The little maid's words may seem to verge upon the absurd, yet to my muddied mind they are deeply well founded.Why is this?Long ago Ye Fashan summoned a soul to compose an inscription, and Li Changji was called by imperial command to write a record; though the events differ, their principle is the same.Thus office is matched to talent; if you were not the proper person, how could the appointment have been bestowed indiscriminately?I now believe that the Lord of Heaven entrusted the scales of judgment wisely: the choice was perfectly fitting and harmonious, and thus, I hope, did not betray the gifts with which you were endowed.Hoping that your undimmed spirit may perhaps ascend and descend through this place, I have ventured to offer these crude and vulgar words, though they may offend your discerning ear.Then he sang to summon her, saying:

窃思女儿自临浊世,迄今凡十有六载。其先之乡籍姓氏,湮沦而莫能考者久矣。而玉得于衾枕栉沐之间,栖息宴游之夕,亲昵狎亵,相与共处者,仅五年八月有畸。忆女儿曩生之昔,其为质则金玉不足喻其贵,其为性则冰雪不足喻其洁,其为神则星日不足喻其精,其为貌则花月不足喻其色。姊妹悉慕媖娴,妪媪咸仰惠德。孰料鸠鸩恶其高,鹰鸷翻遭罦罬,薋葹妒其臭,茞兰竟被芟鉏!花原自怯,岂奈狂飙,柳本多愁,何禁骤雨。偶遭蛊虿之谗,遂抱膏肓之疚。故尔樱唇红褪,韵吐呻吟,杏脸香枯,色陈顑颔,诼谣謑诟,出自屏帏,荆棘蓬榛,蔓延户牖。岂招尤则替,实攘诟而终。既忳幽沉于不尽,复含罔屈于无穷。高标见嫉,闺帏恨比长沙,直烈遭危,巾帼惨于羽野。自蓄辛酸,谁怜夭折!仙云既散,芳趾难寻。洲迷聚窟,何来却死之香?海失灵槎,不获回生之药。眉黛烟青,昨犹我画,指环玉冷,今倩谁温?鼎炉之剩药犹存,襟泪之余痕尚渍。镜分鸾别,愁开麝月之奁,梳化龙飞,哀折檀云之齿。委金钿于草莽,拾翠㔩于尘埃。楼空鳷鹊,徒悬七夕之针,带断鸳鸯,谁续五丝之缕?况乃金天属节,白帝司时,孤衾有梦,空室无人。桐阶月暗,芳魂与倩影同销,蓉帐香残,娇喘共细言皆绝。连天衰草,岂独蒹葭,匝地悲声,无非蟋蟀。露苔晚砌,穿帘不度寒砧,雨荔秋垣,隔院希闻怨笛。芳名未泯,檐前鹦鹉犹呼,艳质将亡,槛外海棠预老。捉迷屏后,莲瓣无声,鬪草庭前,兰芽枉待。抛残绣线,银笺彩缕谁裁?折断冰丝,金斗御香未熨。昨承严命,既趋车而远涉芳园,今犯慈威,复拄杖而遽抛孤柩。及闻槥棺被燹,惭违共穴之盟,石椁成灾,愧迨同灰之诮。尔乃西风古寺,淹滞青燐,落日荒丘,零星白骨。楸榆飒飒,蓬艾萧萧。隔雾圹以啼猿,绕烟塍而泣鬼。自为红绡帐里,公子情深,始信黄土垄中,女儿命薄!汝南泪血,斑斑洒向西风,梓泽余衷,默默诉凭冷月。呜呼!固鬼蜮之为灾,岂神灵而亦妒。钳诐奴之口,讨岂从宽,剖悍妇之心,忿犹未释!在君之尘缘虽浅,然玉之鄙意岂终。因蓄拳拳之思,不禁谆谆之问。始知上帝垂旌,花宫待诏,生侪兰蕙,死辖芙蓉。听小婢之言,似涉无稽,以浊玉之思,则深为有据。何也?昔叶法善摄魂以撰碑,李长吉被诏而为记,事虽殊,其理则一也。故相物以配才,苟非其人,恶乃滥乎?始信上帝委托权衡,可谓至洽至协,庶不负其所秉赋也。因希其不昧之灵,或陟降于兹,特不揣鄙俗之词,有污慧听。乃歌而招之曰:

If you dwell amid primal chaos and abide in stillness, then even should you come here, I could not behold you.Draw aside the smoky vines to make a screen for your passage; array the spear-like sweet flags in serried ranks.Rouse the willow eyes from their fond sleep; release the lotus heart from its bitter taste.The Plain Maiden awaits you by the cassia cliffs, and Fufei welcomes you upon the orchid islet.Nongyu plays the reed organ, while Hanhuang strikes the wooden tiger.Summon the consort of Mount Song and awaken the Old Mother of Mount Li.The tortoise reveals its divine markings upon the banks of the Luo, and sacred beasts perform the dance of Xianchi.Beneath the Red River dragons chant; within the Pearl Grove phoenixes gather and soar.Here they come, here in reverence—not bearing ritual baskets or bamboo hampers.Your chariot sets forth from the City of Rosy Clouds; your banners turn back toward the Mystic Garden.For a moment the manifest and unseen seem joined; then gathering vapors suddenly bar the way once more.Now parting, now joining—smoke and clouds; dim and boundless—mist and rain.The dusty haze withdraws and the stars rise high; stream and mountain shine beneath the midnight moon.Why is my heart so restless, as though in waking dreams your form lived vividly before me?Then, sobbing, I gaze after you in sorrow; weeping, I wander to and fro.Human voices fall silent and remote; nature's music sounds through the tall bamboos.Startled birds scatter in flight, and fish make splashing sounds as they feed.In grief I offer this prayer; the rite fulfilled, I await a blessed sign.Alas, alas!Deign to partake of this offering!

若夫鸿蒙而居,寂静以处,虽临于兹,余亦莫睹。搴烟萝而为步幛,列枪蒲而森行伍。警柳眼之贪眠,释莲心之味苦。素女约于桂岩,宓妃迎于兰渚。弄玉吹笙,寒簧击敔。征嵩岳之妃,启骊山之姥。龟呈洛浦之灵,兽作咸池之舞。潜赤水兮龙吟,集珠林兮凤翥。爰格爰诚,匪簠匪筥。发轫乎霞城,返旌乎玄圃。既显微而若通,复氤氲而倏阻。离合兮烟云,空蒙兮雾雨。尘霾敛兮星高,溪山丽兮月午。何心意之忡忡,若寤寐之栩栩。余乃欷歔怅望,泣涕傍徨。人语兮寂历,天籁兮筼筜。鸟惊散而飞,鱼唼喋以响。志哀兮是祷,成礼兮期祥。呜呼哀哉!尚飨!

When he had finished reading, he burned the silk and poured out the tea as an offering, still lingering there, unable to tear himself away.Only after the little maid urged him three or four times did he finally turn back.:“。”Suddenly they heard someone behind the rocks laugh and say, “Please, wait a moment.” Hearing this, both of them could not help starting in alarm.便:“The little maid turned to look and saw a human figure emerging from among the hibiscus flowers; she cried out, “Oh no—a ghost!!”,——Qingwen has truly come to reveal her spirit!” Baoyu, frightened, hurriedly looked as well—and what happened next will be told in the following chapter.

读毕,遂焚帛奠茗,犹依依不舍。小鬟催至再四,方才回身。忽听山石之后有一人笑道:“且请留步。”二人听了,不免一惊。那小鬟回头一看,却是个人影从芙蓉花中走出来,他便大叫:“不好,有鬼。晴雯真来显魂了!”唬得宝玉也忙看时,——且听下回分解。

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What it’s about

Jia Zheng summons Baoyu and the other boys to compose verses on Lin Siniang, the legendary warrior known as the Fair Maid General, who led women soldiers in a doomed defense of her prince. The exercise looks like leisurely literary instruction, but Baoyu rejects bland praise and develops the subject in an ornate song that honors female courage more seriously than the conventional men around him expect. His success briefly wins Jia Zheng's approval. The commissioned performance also prepares a contrast between an officially commemorated loyal woman and a servant whose fidelity the household has just denied.

Grieving for Qingwen, Baoyu accepts a maid's consoling claim that she has become the divinity of the hibiscus flowers. He composes an elaborate dirge and performs it before the blossoms, addressing the dead through offerings, recollection and extravagant classical allusion. Daiyu appears just after the recitation and discusses revisions with him; her presence makes the lament's language about a wronged, beautiful woman point beyond Qingwen toward Daiyu's own fate. Baoyu can create a private canonization for Qingwen, but poetry cannot reverse the authority that expelled her or the poverty in which she died.

When it was written 背景

A 誄 is a formal lament that recounts the virtues of the dead, a genre normally suited to public commemoration. Baoyu pointedly spends it on a maid, giving Qingwen the dignity withheld by her masters, while 杜撰 concedes that his rite and its flower-spirit premise are invented. The Lin Siniang assignment makes that choice sharper: Jia Zheng readily sponsors verse about a safely legendary woman warrior, whereas truthful praise of a recently expelled servant must occur outside household ceremony. The chapter's language is unusually allusive, so learners need not decode every historical ornament to follow the ethical transfer. Watch how Daiyu's arrival destabilizes the addressee; Qingwen remains the immediate mourner's subject, but the dirge becomes another inadvertent prophecy for the living woman.

Words in this chapter 生词